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To Save Your Life
Heroes are hard to come by
Especially in this day and age
Because of you- I am still alive
Hail, the vanquisher of pain
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I fought as long as I could have
But I sank into the weakness below
And I felt my sorrow's wrath
The helplessness took over
My fists let go
Of the resistance
I fell from hope
The light faded in the distance
It was all a dream
A wish...
A simple false belief
I hid...
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Hands dangled frantically / Tears dripped endlessly
I needed a hero to save me / I yearned to be set free
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A hand reached out
Held tight...
I was finally found
Relieved sigh...
I rose back to grace
And the darkness brightened
The savior I awaited
Lifted me up and triumphed
I prayed as much as I needed
Even when I was beyond drowning
I knew a kind soul would pay heed
Every mourning human deserves saving
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When we are used to being alone
True kindness is difficult to find
But one day that hero will come
To save your life
Heroes are hard to come by
Especially in this day and age
Because of you- I am still alive
Hail, the vanquisher of pain
-
I fought as long as I could have
But I sank into the weakness below
And I felt my sorrow's wrath
The helplessness took over
My fists let go
Of the resistance
I fell from hope
The light faded in the distance
It was all a dream
A wish...
A simple false belief
I hid...
-
Hands dangled frantically / Tears dripped endlessly
I needed a hero to save me / I yearned to be set free
-
A hand reached out
Held tight...
I was finally found
Relieved sigh...
I rose back to grace
And the darkness brightened
The savior I awaited
Lifted me up and triumphed
I prayed as much as I needed
Even when I was beyond drowning
I knew a kind soul would pay heed
Every mourning human deserves saving
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When we are used to being alone
True kindness is difficult to find
But one day that hero will come
To save your life
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This is All About You
This Is All About You:
Most people giving you advice, might take a quote from a book
Most people giving you advice, have never had a real look
So from someone who's been watching, let me lay my heart bare
I want to show you all the special things, about the girl for whom I care
She always does her very best, no matter how tough the task
Even when she's struggling, she puts on a brave mask
She's always trying to learn new things, just for a chance to make you proud
She can be a little bit quiet, but I think that's better than being loud
She's not the very best in sports, I know she can be kind of a klutz
But she smiles and goes on an
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I'm Soaring Now
I'm Soaring Now
This is a different level of fear
It's wounding my truth and morality
It's strong enough to bring me here
On the edge of life- peering over to serenity
It's not impossible to grasp
But it's typical to assume
The last breath is the fact
That after death- peace will follow soon
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Countless flashing memories
Crossover swiftly
Ready to be set free
From this skin of...treachery
Fade/Fade/Fade
My scars peel off
Erased from my sight
The remains become soft
So this is what...innocence feels like
Wake/Wake/Wake
Destiny is somehow connected
Fate deems to be natural
The circle of the two is perfected
The beginning to the end is.
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Nightmare: The Only Cure
Nightmare: The Only Cure
My insides burn-
Like swallowing acid
Reality slows down-
Smiling is therapeutic
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Health is a virtue / Strength is torture
Alive again tomorrow / Enduring the horror
It's excruciating
To keep on breathing
Every reflection
Mirrors are left sickened
Grinning back at myself
You must be enjoying this hell
Perfect possession / Muffled suffocation
Heart is racing / Sight is darkening
In these hallucinations
My skin is melting
Oh how I wish I was dreaming
Of when I finally start recovering
It's only hopeful thinking
A cure for me is a delusion
Quarantined tears / Reality's nightmare
I am beyond repair / All were
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I awaited for that day
For you to come and save me
My hands reached out to you
When you held on- I knew this hero was true
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For you to come and save me
My hands reached out to you
When you held on- I knew this hero was true
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I released my first prose piece ever, check it out!
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Prologue: The Day The Rains Came For Me
I had a feeling that it was going to rain soon. Oh how I wish to get caught up in it. I don't have an umbrella, and my coat doesn't have a hood. The desire to become drenched lingered, because I haven't gotten drenched in such a long time. I love the sound it makes when it hits every surface. The clings and clangs were a joy of mine. I secretly love it when my hair gets wet- or ruined. Especially when my bangs droop down into my eyes. I indulge in the sensation of when the water streams down my cheek.
It was cloudy and the hue was gray. I couldn't stand the humidity that plagued the city.
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Sobriety's Rise
Sobriety's Rise
I exile you from my veins
You won't affect me ever again
Take with you the very worst of me
I will no longer be a part of thee!
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Too long have my eyes been closed
So many years have passed in vain
I can't let the road ahead get any worse
I'm no longer a victim of your taint
I dwell no more- in those old woes
Though I regret the pain I allowed myself to sustain
Mirrors don't snare / Family doesn't glare
This hope I bear / I've made it here
Cleanse my spirit away / Allow scars to fade
Embrace the change / Unlock the cage
My dreams will no longer weep
The nightmares refuse to reimmerse
I can move forward if I r
Healing My Heart
Healing My Heart
I thought a day like today would never come
When a sincere smile finally broke through
And I've grasped onto this sense of freedom
When I forged this connection with you
I was so deep into it
Thinking I never would get out
Being stuck in the past has made me into this
But now I hold my head up instead of facing down
Because of this, I've realize there's a difference between my tears
I used to only shed the ones for all of the mistakes I've made
Which I've cried for all of those long, and lonesome years
Until today, so I'm overwhelmed by the relief you gave
Undone, unvexed, unbroken
The difference is t
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This one is excellent, and is my favorite of your works I've read.
One thing that stood out to me was the diction. All of the wording was emotional as it explained the events, and really made the piece powerful, vivid, and even relatable. The thoughts were thoroughly expressed and flowed well. It stayed interesting and involved, but wasn't overpowering. You have a real talent for matching the tone of the poem to all the emotions, no matter how subtle or difficult. The desperation and the struggle were quite well demonstrated, especially.
With this one, I'm afraid I'm having a difficult time of finding weak points. You did a fantastic job, really. 5/5
One thing that stood out to me was the diction. All of the wording was emotional as it explained the events, and really made the piece powerful, vivid, and even relatable. The thoughts were thoroughly expressed and flowed well. It stayed interesting and involved, but wasn't overpowering. You have a real talent for matching the tone of the poem to all the emotions, no matter how subtle or difficult. The desperation and the struggle were quite well demonstrated, especially.
With this one, I'm afraid I'm having a difficult time of finding weak points. You did a fantastic job, really. 5/5