Becoming Unjudged

Hypocrisy
Devoured beliefs
And engulfed society

It's hard to believe
Some of us still have our humanity
But there are those who still cannot see

The damaged moralities
That was bestowed from corrupted creed
You don't know the heavy burden that each of us carries
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Growing up
As gray as gray can be
Told that the way I am is wrong
I was taught to fear the real me!

Learning to hate differentiality
Hearing whispers all around
I despised my own identity
Things need to change now!

Some of us don't even make it that far / It's not what you do- but who you are
None of us should ever live in the dark / There will

In The Distance

In The Distance

I've realized that nothing never really ends
Because it's just the beginning of the emptiness
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I want to take back my actions / I want to give you reasons

I said all of the words I've needed
To you
And to the mirror

I wish those were silent confessions / I wish none of this had happened

I finally let out all of those feelings I hid
For you
Beneath my surface

They're just emotions from a fallen / Because without you I'm nothing

I meant every single tear I cried
With you
My one true purpose

I'm feeling so forsaken and faithless / To my world you're everything

I couldn't hold on as I slowly let go of my grip
Of

My Invisible Life

My Invisible Life

Chest piercing
Pulse bounding
Barely breathing

I'm praying
On the surface of anxiety

I'm weeping
Getting used to this melancholy
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They said...
They said...
They said...
They'd always be here to help

But instead...
But instead...
But instead...
I've always only had myself

I regret...
I regret...
I regret...
Opening the gates to this hell

It spreads...
It spreads...
It spreads...
And the screams are revealed

Tears shed...
Tears shed...
Tears shed...
I let my sorrow and resolve meld
-
Sight fading
Body numbing
Emotions withering

My desires are overtaken
I know this isn't right

But my lies weren't convincing
So this wi

Sobriety's Rise

Sobriety's Rise

I exiled you from my veins

You will never affect me again

Take with you the very worst of me

I will no longer be a part of thee!
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Too long have my eyes been closed
So many years have passed in vain
I couldn't let the road ahead get any worse

I'm no longer a victim of your taint
I dwell no more- in those old woes
Though I regret the pain I allowed myself to sustain

Mirrors don't snare / Family doesn't glare
This hope I bear / I've made it here

Cleansed my spirit away / Allowed scars to fade
Embraced the change / Unlocked the cage

My dreams no longer weep
The nightmares refuse to reimmerse
I can move forward if I really

Dreaming Of Tears

Dreaming Of Tears

Weary-eyed
Weakened to the very core
Traumatized
I can't endure this anymore

I'm going to black out
And be transported to a realm
Where my screams don't make a sound
Hate keeps me bound while I leave my fears to drown
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I loath the days without rest
I despise the nights of endless stress

Though I can't settle for anything less
Because lower than this is death

It's like living and sleeping within tortuous realities
Even though I'm unconscious- there is no such thing as rest for me

No one knows how powerful my dreams can be
No one knows all of the graphic images I've seen

Dive into the ocean! / Swim through the thorns!
L

Shooting StarShooting Star

Looking up at the dark blue sky
Wishing upon a shooting star
Trying so hard not to cry
Yet the first tears aren’t very far

You think about what lies ahead
hoping that no more tears will be shed.
You try to be strong so all could see
that there is nothing that you can’t be.

Looking up at the dark blue sky
Wishing upon a shooting star
You smile sadly and wave goodbye
Taking nothing but your heart wrenching scars.

To Save Your Life

To Save Your Life

Heroes are hard to come by

Especially in this day and age

Because of you- I am still alive

Hail, the vanquisher of pain
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I fought as long as I could have
But I sank into the weakness below
And I felt my sorrow's wrath
The helplessness took over

My fists let go
Of the resistance

I fell from hope
The light faded in the distance

It was all a dream
A wish...

A simple false belief
I hid...
-
Hands dangled frantically / Tears dripped endlessly
I needed a hero to save me / I yearned to be set free
-
A hand reached out
Held tight...

I was finally found
Relieved sigh...

I rose back to grace
And the darknes

Promises Of Today

Promises Of Today

The sands of time can be unpredictable
But to mold them is impossible
And being let down is typical

I, for one, know what it's like
Having that unrelenting doubt dwell inside
And withstanding all of those tears that aren't dried

With that said
I want to help you, my dear friend
For the hope of happiness is within the reach of your hands
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I need to apologize for not always being there
It's because I have my own slate
But now I'm finally here
I'm sorry I'm late

I've been where you are
I've seen what you've seen
And I was able to break through the dark
But I'll go back for you, just to help you believe

That

Breaking Out Tonight

Breaking Out Tonight

Your name is despair
And you demand that I live in fear

I gave you everything that you have ever asked
But I never got anything in return for any of that
Although you still managed to continually stab me in the back

Your name is remorse
And you wish for me abide by a damaging oath

Nothing but puppet, as I was used as your scapegoat
Sinister strings guided me to cast aside all forms of hope
We considered each other friends, because you were all I used to know

Your name is sorrow
And you want me to never again see tomorrow

I am your undying sacrifice, the one and only reoccurring offering
Once you had a taste,

LOVE IS LOVESome people are Straight
while others are Gay
Some believe that Gays are a Sin
while others call it Love

Others are Bisexual
Who love both of the sexes
Many people call it a Sin
while others believe it isn't fake

There is nothing wrong with it
We are here to love one another
So why do people call us a Sin?
When to be Honest Love is a Beautiful thing

Many will think its wrong
while others think it's perfectly fine
Not all girls love Men
and not all Men love Girls

So why can't we all be equal?
Why must there be a Fight?
Maybe I will go to Hell
Cause maybe it is a Sin

If loving someone is a issue
if loving the same sex is wr

Embers In The Rain

Embers In The Rain

My blood contains the power of the sun
Instigation becomes dangerous
And when control is reduced to none
My rage is monstrous

There's no turning back when it begins
I will be searching for a source to blame
I will unleash a torrent of hell from within
For I am known as the bearer of the flame
-
I loath crossing that line
Being locked behind blind eyes

But I won't regret the ruins that I will create
As I leave supernova footprints in my wake

I destroy everything more than once! / My limits are undone!
Infinite ashes haunt darkening lungs! / My heart becomes numb!

Consuming infernos help me cope
As I bathe in the smother

Time Is The Cure

Time Is The Cure

Right hand of destruction
Left hand of creation

It's a never ending cycle
A fatal revival caught in a downward spiral

I tear down reality’s mask
As I build up a truth to give hope a chance

The veiled darkness decays
The guiding light fades

I let go of an old pain
As new tears wash it away
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The sun always rises
The moon always sets

The rain subsides
The storm is put to rest

Clouds confide / Memories detest
Skies collide / Cries confessed

Light shines / Dark regrets
Pain hides / Peace professed

A new day awaits
An old night forgotten

Tomorrow I shall awake
To cradle what remains unbroken
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I can't erase my mista

BloodTonight I'm so alone.
No one there to watch.
Just watching myself
Bleed, bleed, bleed.

I continue to fight.
I lost all the time.
No one can save me
From the blood on the floor.

The pain that follows.
The red sea.
The empty lies to my replies.
All of it is filled with blood.

My blood.
The blood that has been spilt.
All the same.
It's all the same.

The pain I felt.
The river bled.
All the dread.
Now what do I feel?

The river of blood surrounds me.
No longer able to see the light.
Destruction destroying me.
No light, only blood.

Pain,
Loss,
Destruction,
Blood.

Sinking aloneGasping for every breathe I take,
Dreading all the mistakes I'll make,
I hope I do everything right
I don't want to lose this fight.
Each bad choice takes me away,
And every time I fade away.
I lose myself in this mess,
And sometimes I could care less.
Life goes on, I watch it go,
Some things I can't change, I know.
I try to hold on to every chance I get,
But I can't do it all, my time is set.
I must give up some things I would like
To look at things to live my life right
I don't care if you like what I choose,
Because in the end, I've got nothing to lose.

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Rain Of Color

by *RainbowizedSky, Jan 8, 2013, 8:35:09 AM
Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

Rain Of Color

All of the struggles I had to endure
I always desperately held on
It was a day after day ritual
Learning to stay strong

Different advice from the wise
I had to fuse it all together
And make sense of every voice
I couldn't allow my hope to wither
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_{Believe in the soul
Embrace the heart
It's what makes you whole
It defines who you really are

Envision the dreams
As if they're real
Remember where you've been
Know that every wound will heal

Every scar tells a story / Every step is towards glory
There's always a chance to triumph / There's always a time for resonance

We always pick ourselves back up / There's no such thing as enough
Born to live free / Alive to feel peace

Hold onto that spark
Even if it's not much
It'll guide you through the dark
It'll help you when you're lost

Compare not to others
Live at your own pace
It always gets better
Faith never really fades}
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I've made it to this place
Where finally I realize
I've journeyed through the pain
And I have survived

Even though I walk through the valley of color
I will not fear life
And never again will I have to suffer
For thou art my light

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Let it fall / Let it storm
Rise above all / Hide no more
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This is a reflection of my dark poetry series "The Rain Chronicles"
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Rain Of Fate

Rain Of Fate

The proud flags were torn away
When warfare came

Burning buildings collapsed
Just like the nations which used to stand

We're no longer united
Because we're consumed by fighting

Quarreling over desires / selfishness is earned
Money sets lives on fire / morals are governed
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Humanity conquered this gift of nature
Because we were given this curse of failure
Just our simple touch turns beauty into torture
And we won't stop, until we get more and more

The sins of our fathers
The prayers of our mothers
The tears of our sisters
The blood of our brothers

A man-made cycle of life and death
Believing in religion; and ab

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Rain Of Darkness

Rain Of Darkness

Something inside me broke
The core of my soul snapped
That is when I felt this numbing cold
I blinked, and everything started to fade to black

When you left me alone
I felt this eternal betrayal
When you finally let me go
The pain inside me became unstable

The weight on my shoulders collapsed
While the world I knew faded
As the remorse relapsed
I'm consumed by hatred
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Thou have forsaken
So the rest shall witness my conviction

My hope was taken
But was replaced by affliction

You knew what would happen
When you took back your salvation

Why am I the one abandoned?
I didn't take -ANYTHING!- for granted

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Prologue: The Day The Rains Came For Me

I had a feeling that it was going to rain soon. Oh how I wish to get caught up in it. I don't have an umbrella, and my coat doesn't have a hood. The desire to become drenched lingered, because I haven't gotten drenched in such a long time. I love the sound it makes when it hits every surface. The clings and clangs were a joy of mine. I secretly love it when my hair gets wet- or ruined. Especially when my bangs droop down into my eyes. I indulge in the sensation of when the water streams down my cheek.

It was cloudy and the hue was gray. I couldn't stand the humidity that plagued the city.

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Sobriety's Rise

Sobriety's Rise

I exile you from my veins

You won't affect me ever again

Take with you the very worst of me

I will no longer be a part of thee!
-
Too long have my eyes been closed
So many years have passed in vain
I can't let the road ahead get any worse

I'm no longer a victim of your taint
I dwell no more- in those old woes
Though I regret the pain I allowed myself to sustain

Mirrors don't snare / Family doesn't glare
This hope I bear / I've made it here

Cleanse my spirit away / Allow scars to fade
Embrace the change / Unlock the cage

My dreams will no longer weep
The nightmares refuse to reimmerse
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Critique by ~pencilxpusher Jan 9, 2013, 5:35:58 PM

I like the placement of your words and none were overly repeated, but if I would change anything about this piece I would say that the imagery of the piece needs to be greater, because for a "Rain of Color" it wasn't really colorful. One of the great things about poetry is that you should be able to feel each word's strong emotions and it should never be a secret about what it is centered around. I give you props for having most of it rhyme, for me that has always been a hard thing to produce. But, just a little hint, I would try to work on the lines of the poetry, (this is free verse, so it's not really that big of a deal) because the beat of the piece (for lack of a better word) seems to be off in certain parts and it doesn't follow correctly.

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*tanya3286 Apr 15, 2013 Professional Writer

Quite moving and beautifully phrased.

I love your line 'Faith never really fades'. That's wonderful and true.
Keep writing.

*RainbowizedSky Apr 18, 2013 Hobbyist Writer

Now that you point it out, that line is pretty powerful.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. It makes me nervous that some people thought it wasn't as effective. I wanna make it better, but I don't know if I can.

*tanya3286 Apr 24, 2013 Professional Writer

Nah... never ever stress if its 'effective enough' for other people. Its just their view that they are giving you. You wrote it first and foremost for yourself, eh? What moves the soul and flows out of it as creative can never be non-effective... how can it be, when it created something?!

It was beautiful. I felt that the writing style was childlike and simple... not in a clumsy way, but in an innocent way. Its the declaration to be strong, that you are making to the world, after being hurt but knowing that you came out wiser and worthier. Its honest, that's what makes it special, even in its simplicity.
Simplicity may not always be appreciated in a world that loves complex things, emotions and people, but it is one of the most powerful and desirable attributes of the human soul. Its divine in its origin and so its ever-beautiful. So don't you ever worry yourself about that.

*RainbowizedSky May 2, 2013 Hobbyist Writer

Thank you for the reassurance. I need something along those lines said to me once in a while. I get too caught up in certain things with certain people to really focus on the end goal. <3

*tanya3286 May 2, 2013 Professional Writer

You are always welcome!

Type out feel good and reassuring lines or mottos like that from your printer and paste them anywhere where you see them regularly - bathroom door, walls, desks... etc.

It reminds you as to what is really important and drives the waste thoughts from your mind and keeps you free of garbage.

~Fan-Gogh Feb 27, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

That is wonderful, I first clicked on this because the name reminded me of my very old drawing :thumb312286130: and I think it works very well together

*RainbowizedSky Mar 4, 2013 Hobbyist Writer

Yeah they both remind me of each other now that you pointed it out.
How old is that drawing? It's awesome! ^_^

~Fan-Gogh Mar 4, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

A couple of years maybe?

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Congratulations ! Your deviation has been featured in the group

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