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Breaking Out Tonight

Your name is despair
And you demand that I live in fear


I gave you everything that you have ever asked
But I never got anything in return for any of that
Although you still managed to continually stab me in the back

Your name is remorse
And you wish for me abide by a damaging oath


Nothing but puppet, as I was used as your scapegoat
Sinister strings guided me to cast aside all forms of hope
We considered each other friends, because you were all I used to know

Your name is sorrow
And you want me to never again see tomorrow


I am your undying sacrifice, the one and only reoccurring offering
Once you had a taste, you only had one thing on your mind – my suffering
Countless times, putting you before myself, it's traumatizing and so haunting

Your name is tainted
And you believe that we are fated


I've remained behind your bars, locked up and shackled
A prisoner held captive, wrapped in chains and a straitjacket
Handcuffed and muzzled, because you knew one day I would try and change this

Your name is corruption
And you desire for me to take on all of your burdens


I was a temporary cure for your demeaning curse
Stacking everything up on me just so you wouldn't get worse
It was all for your own benefit, and it paid off, but I just can't take it anymore

Your name is darkness
And you plan on always afflicting me with your sickness


But I cannot-and-will-not allow this to become my end
I believe in my own morals, and I have my own aspiring dreams
So I'm going to be leaving you, because this is my life, and this is my creed

Your name is the same as mine
But I'm going to be the only one who is breaking out TONIGHT!

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wonderful piece of work :)
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Mood: Wow! *RainbowizedSky Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I am so happy that you've enjoyed this one. Because it means a lot to me! :D
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your welcome :) keep upt the great wrok ;) :w00t:
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~Scentrus Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The picture for this reminds me of the theme song for Kamen Rider Kiva, it's called "Break The Chain". This is absolutely amazing, great work~
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Mood: Joy *RainbowizedSky Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That's an anime right?

And thank you. :D I'm glad you found it to your liking.
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~Scentrus Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol nope, it's more of a live-action-power rangers-ish series. It was made by the same people who brought us power rangers too actually. I advise you to check it out if you have the free time to, you might really like it! But in the meantime here's the music I was speaking of [link]
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Mood: Love ~JyurriSneffets Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I very much enjoyed this, good job. Keep your writing up.
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Mood: Love *RainbowizedSky Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I will try! :P
Thank you, I'm so happy that you enjoyed this one. <3
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*JassieMaam Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like how strong this was. I might use this as a sort of inspiration for a piece I do soon. I was kinda wondering if you'd mind if I used the bolded parts and just tried my own interpretation of the italics. If not I understand completely. Either way, I did truly enjoy reading this. c:
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Mood: Wow! *RainbowizedSky Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you liked it.
But if you're wanting to use the bold parts, it'd be more of a tribute than an original piece. So if you do, make sure to label it as a tribute, and like, link back to this piece, if you do.
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